through open window
butterfly brings morning breeze
sound of surf carries
The challenge in Carpe Diem Crossroads #4 morning breeze is to write a new haiku inspired by the words in two haiku (“fusing” them)
~ written by Arakida Moritake and Jane Reichhold ~
A fallen blossom
returning to the bough, I thought —
But no, a butterfly.
© Arakida Moritake
~~~~~
morning breeze
coming in the window
surf sounds
© Jane Reichhold
Image source: alphacoders.com (edited here)
Refreshing! (K)
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It’s that ocean breeze!
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Send it our way!
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I’ll try, but well… Missouri, you know.
Mostly, I’m dreaming.
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“dreaming is free”
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Melded marvelously
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Thank you.
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Beautiful!
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🙂 Thanks!
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Beautiful
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🙂 Merci!
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Chapeau my friend a wonderful fusion.
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🙂 Thank you.
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Nice job!
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Thanks!
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