child once more ~ senryū

August 3, 2020August 3, 2020 / Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr

child once more
a son understands
roles reversed

In response to a senryū by Chèvrefeuille

memories
fading away more and more
she … a child again
© Chèvrefeuille

5 thoughts on “child once more ~ senryū”

merrildsmith

August 4, 2020 at 6:16 am

Chèvrefeuille’s haiku makes me think of my mom. 😔 Yours is a nice response.

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- rivrvlogr
  
  August 4, 2020 at 7:24 am
  
  Thank you, Merril. His made me think of my own mother, as well.
  
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memadtwo

August 4, 2020 at 10:03 am

Theres a lot of truth in this. I too, am thinking of my mother. (K)

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- rivrvlogr
  
  August 5, 2020 at 1:27 pm
  
  Sigh. Thank you.
  
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