pyrotechnical
breathtaking demonstration
out of darkness, light
astonishing flames
seen through a kaleidoscope
mirrors without smoke
This haiku pair is in response to Haiku Review Challenge by The Secret Keeper. The short film offered for review is Fire by Saulo Jamariqueli and Dirk Rees, found on Vimeo.
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WOW – that sure fires up the imagination! Your lines, too – “mirrors without smoke”!
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Thanks! These reviews can be a chance to loosen things up, haiku-wise, and still (hopefully) have a haiku moment.
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A kaleidoscope of flames…the words and images revolve. (K)
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Now that would be some fun editing, to have the words flow through the flames.
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Firey fantastic
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🙂
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Very cool! Like fractals on fire. I enjoyed your Haiku’s also.
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Thanks, Betty.
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I read the haiku. Good stuff. Then I watched the vid. Then I re-read the haiku. AWESOME!
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Thanks!
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Thank you for sharing.
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