Cold Shoulder
What separates us
does not make us better.
Even the thinnest
layer of ice threatens
to shatter all that we’ve built.
Words left unspoken,
never allowed
to reach the surface,
only serve to strengthen
the divide, remove
the chance to heal.
Speak to me.
This is my response to Quadrille #168,
the prompt from Mish at dVerse ~ Poets Pub,
which is to use a form of the word ice in a Quadrille – a 44-word poem
(excluding title), with no required meter or rhyme.
This is a profound and moving poem, Ken. Thank you.
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And thank you, Rebecca.
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Truer words never spoken. Most important entreaty ever made.
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Thanks, Ron..
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Amen. Keeping the channels of communication open is everything. Fear is ice.
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That it is. Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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Silence often speaks loudest, alas.
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Unfortunately.
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I was just discussing this situation with a friend of mine. Silence, in this case, is not golden. (K)
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Agreed.
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This power holds a great deal of power in just a few short lines.
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Thank you.
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*poem You’re welcome.
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If only feelings could be healed, sometimes the ice is too hard to break.
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Ain’t that the truth!
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“What separates us /does not make us better.” Wow…that is profound, wise and could stand on its own. It made me think of the silence becoming it’s own entity, an enemy to battle.
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❤ Thank you.
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A beautiful poem
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome
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Simply fantastic, Ken
❤
David
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Thank you, David.
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Yes, speak, heal, love it.
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Thanks.
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Pleasure Ken
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Very poignant poem Ken 🙂
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Thank you.
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Profound and so true, Ken.
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Love this so true Ken! ❣️
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Thank you. A standstill is not moving forward.
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You’re most welcome Ken! Indeed true! ❣️
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