Immersion
Today is Day 9 of National/Global Poetry Writing Month,
and the prompt at napowrimo.net is to write a concrete poem,
one in which the lines and words are organized to take
a shape that reflects in some way the theme of the poem.
Unfortunately, I’m having difficulty formatting the text on the page
in the WordPress editor, but the lower half of the image shows how it appears on my screen.
Click on the image for a larger view in a new tab.
Formatted differently, the poem might appear as below.
Immersion
More than a tool, in my hands
this paddle is an extension of myself,
the limits of my energy removed,
creating a connection with that which
already is the core of my essence,
in turn allowing me to become as one
with the very nature of all that surrounds me
and affects me so profoundly.
Well done. And I understand your frustration. Making the poem format into the correct shape can be daunting.
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Thank you. As it was, I spent too much time making the picture!
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I’ve been there which is why I kinda copped out today with a simple shape.
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Have you tried editing the html directly before? The PRE tag is almost perfect for this kind of thing. It keeps any and all white space that you type between the opening and closing tags. So all blank spaces and line breaks that you add show up when viewed. That’s how I got my tree to come out the way it did. It does display in a monospaced font, though, and if your text is too wide for the space, it creates a left-to-right scrolling box.
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Thanks.
I use the html editor, but mostly in a copy/paste fashion from my previous posts. Changing font size, spacing and color are about the extent of it.
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It looks great enlarged. Good concept that can be customized to fit each person.
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Thank you, Lisa. 🙂
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You are welcome.
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Shape and text are perfect for each other. Bravo!
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Thanks!
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Nicely done. Beautiful concept.
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Thank you. It’s been a while since I tried this method.
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Love it! And how very clever, Ken!
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Thanks!
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Oh that’s lovely Ken! (Yes, formatting is a frustration – I gave up and drew it instead.)
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Thank you. 🙂
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Very clever and meaningful!
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Thanks!
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Wonderful integration of form and function. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe. 🙂
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Oh, marvelous … I love the visual delivery but also the words stand alone in traditional format … your paddle SOOO much more than a tool in hand. Most of us have some sort of tangible “tool” that represents connection to Self … this feels universal and personal, even though a paddle is not my personal link.
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Thank you, Jazz.
I hadn’t thought of it, but as Lisa says, it’s a “concept that can be customized to fit each person.”
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Liked this poem! The paddle shape. Superb!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Ken, your effort is appreciated. I love it! Well done for not giving up like I did and drew using our toddler’s hands 🙂
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🙂 Thank you, Gloria.
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Wow, Ken! Wonderful–so well expressed in shape and words. I am not good at doing shapes at all. 😀
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Thank you, Merril. 🙂
I’ve not done many. I remember doing one about 15 years ago. I was donating platelets and wrote about it in the shape of a blood drop. It ended up on the wall at the donor center at Roswell Park Cancer Center in Buffalo. If I ever find a copy (even the digital seems to have dried up!), I’ll post it here.
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Yes, please do!
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