True Love
Two left feet that can’t dance
know their task is at hand.
You take mine as the band
plays our song. All is grand.
Little girl now all grown,
there’s a truth that’s well known.
I would dance all the night
just to be in your light.
But this dance that we share
on this night leads to where
your full heart must now go,
to the heart of your beau.
Look now deep in my eyes
and I know you’ll surmise
that this old father’s love
welcomes your own truelove.
Meter is not my forte, as I feel I tend to force it, but this is my response (anapestic tetrameter?) to Meet the bar waltzing from Björn at dVerse ~ Poets Pub. We’re asked to “let the dance be your poem.”
Yes, I have two left feet. Two months before my daughter’s wedding, I spent a week in Buffalo so we could take a couple of dance classes together. I then drove back home and practiced the waltz every night with my wife so I could give my daughter her father-daughter dance. It went off without a hitch. (Except, of course, for the ceremony earlier in the day!) The picture above is from that moment.
Beautiful poem to capture a beautiful moment.
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Thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome 😉
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Aww, that’s beautiful.
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Thank you. 🙂
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BRAVO – your meter works, your rhyming works, and your model of learning to dance for your daughter is WONDERFUL. Not all dads would venture there.
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Thank you, Jazz. I’m normally a shuffler when it comes to a slow dance. (which is the only time you’ll see me on the dance floor!)
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Slow dancing is all I ever engaged … with advantage of letting partner lead. Then came a long spell of no partner when I slow-danced solo in my home. Then came my wonderful husband who is NO-dance (emphatically!) My feet still shuffle to music but I’m content to do so seated next to Mr. NO-dance. 😌
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This is wonderful Ken. I love the poem and the photo shows it all. So very beautiful.
Dwight
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Thank you, Dwight. I’ll see them soon, and my new granddaughter!
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Wonderful!
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Beautiful! The poem and the pic.
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🙂 Thank you.
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Precious poem. Adorable photo. Thanks.
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Thank you, Selma.
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Quite literally … my mouth hang open in exclamation as I read your poem. Your daughter is gorgeous, you quite the proud, handsome father. Full of waltz rhythm … simply beautiful.
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Thank you, Helen for such a wonderful comment.
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Beautiful moment, well captured in your poem. Congrats to your beautiful daughter. Love that photo.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat. This was back in September 2019, and they now have a six-month-old daughter. Fingers crossed I’ll be around for that wedding, as I would be at or past 90!
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Hey, who knows, it’s happened! But the one who knows ain’t saying till it’s done🙂. In the meantime, spoil her as much as you can🙂. Congrats on the granddaughter.!
Pat
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You keep the beat perfectly! As ever.
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🙂 Thank you, Jane.
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That’s a beautiful photo and a heartwarming moment you’ve captured here Ken!
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Thank you, Ingrid. It was a memorable moment, and she gave me this photo as a canvas print.
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A beautiful memento!
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A beautiful way to “give away” your daughter.
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Thank you.
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Lovely poetry and a beautiful picture to capture a precious moment in time. 🙂
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🙂 Thank you.
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🙂
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Awwwwwww….. You’re so SWEET, Ken!
Thank you for sharing this – it warms my heart!
❤
David
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Thank you, David. 🙂
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What a precious memory, and a lovely photo to accompany your waltzing poem.
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It’s a moment I’ll always remember. Thank you.
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you, Paul.
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Most welcome Ken
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simply grand ~
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Thank you.
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What a lovely memory Ken
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Thank you, Di.
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True Love, truly lovely KG. Salute.
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Thank you, sir.
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A sweet, slow, gentle poem filled with love. Excellent
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Thank you, Beverly.
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Awww….(sigh). No left feet involved in the exchange of smiles. (K)
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That’s right. All smiles.
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What a beautiful dance with your daughter!
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😀 Thank you, Mary.
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I love what you did here Ken, with marriage comes that waltz, and even with two left feet, the dance will continue into life.
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“the dance will continue into life” — Wonderful observation. Thank you, Björn.
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Your love shines through for your daughter here! Enjoyed it! 💝
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Thank you. 🙂
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Your daughter’s lucky to have such love, and a poet for a father.
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Thank you. It would be hard to not write about such a tender moment.
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This is a sweetly captured father and daughter moment. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you. It was a special moment.
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Lovely!
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Thank you. It was a lovely moment
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