Obscurity ~ American Sentence

Obscurity is a matter of perception, subject to bias.

This is my response to An Artist Gets His Due, the prompt from Lillian at dVerse ~ Poets Pub, which is to write a poem inspired by one of five portraits by Thorvald Hellesen, a Norwegian abstract artist known for his Cubist paintings. I have chosen “Portrait of Elvind Eckbo,” painted in 1914.

The American Sentence was created by Allen Ginsberg
~ loose American form of haiku, with 17 syllables
~ represented as a sentence
~ reference to a season is not required
~ similar to senryū
~ read more here & here

Image source: ACC Art Books

14 thoughts on “Obscurity ~ American Sentence

  1. It’s as if you’ve been reading my mind, and condensed it to a sentence. Though I would have gone with “Abstraction” or “Life” instead of “Obscurity” if it was my mind: I think.


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