with the wind ~ senryū

May 11, 2023May 11, 2023 / Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr

with the wind
on final journey
his ashes

This senryū is my response to Twiglet #324: his ashes.

Shared with OpenLinkNight #338 at dVerse ~ Poets Pub.

8 thoughts on “with the wind ~ senryū”

Meelosmom

May 11, 2023 at 4:30 pm

Beautiful, Ken!

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- Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr
  
  May 11, 2023 at 5:34 pm
  
  Thank you! 😀
  
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Ron.

May 11, 2023 at 5:32 pm

Kenryu.

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- Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr
  
  May 11, 2023 at 5:34 pm
  
  I like that. I might steal it. 😉
  
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rothpoetry

May 11, 2023 at 8:56 pm

Very nice! “All we are is dust in the wind” ~ Kansas

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Misky

May 12, 2023 at 1:27 pm

Beautifully written.

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Linda Lee Lyberg

May 13, 2023 at 9:41 am

So beautiful Ken.

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Debi

May 14, 2023 at 8:45 am

Oh, lovely

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