accept peace
years have passed
yet you still wear black
in your mind
your sorrow
worn like a mantle
weighs you down
if unchecked
you will be consumed
by darkness
allow light
to enter your life
accept peace
This senryū series is my response to Twiglet #322: you wear black.
Shared with Day Twenty-nine at napowrimo.net (off prompt)
rivrvlogr 
Fine sequence, powerful message, Ken. Thanks.
That was one of my most favorite Twiglet Prompt in a while: https://rlavalette.wordpress.com/2023/04/25/coin-flipped/
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Splendid writing, Ken.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Good advice, lovely senryū,
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