A Clean Cut
His name does not come easily to her, and that is good. She refuses to speak it and would consider herself blessed if she never heard it again. For all the damage he caused her, she is now in a better place with that part of her life behind her. She’s had it sliced away. Leaving a scar would mean admitting that he is still a part of her. But there are no scars. It was a clean cut. Several clean cuts, in fact.
So, she was cutting his steak too thin for his liking? Within seconds of receiving a blow to the side of her head for once more failing to meet his standards, she drove the knife into his heart. Many, many cuts later, his body was bagged and ready for a night trip to the landfill. All traces of him gone.
This is my response to Prosery: slices and scars, the prompt from Sarah at dVerse ~ Poets Pub, where the challenge is to write a prosery, flash fiction or creative nonfiction, with a 144-word limit (here, exactly 144 words). Included in the bit of prose is to be a complete line from a poem. For this prompt, the line is from Liverpool, by Michael Donaghy: “she’s had it sliced away leaving a scar.”
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Doesn’t get darker than this; wowzer. She seems so calm, so matter-of-fact about, that makes it even more chilling.
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Sometimes that’s what it takes.
Thanks, Glenn.
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Wow! This couldnt get any darker
Much💚love
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He got his just desserts. 😉
Thank you, Gillena.
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Oof! I thought this prompt would draw out some dark responses – this is darkissimo!
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Thanks for the prompt!
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YEEEOW!!! That is some gruesome tale! Revenge to the ultimate…wow!
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Yes, I guess it was nasty, any way you cut it. 😉
Thanks, Lillian.
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Wow… a trip to the dark side! Sort of like Martina’s song, Independence Day! Well done Ken.
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And that was the last of the fireworks!
Thank you, Dwight.
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:>)
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I started this thinking there seemed to be a common theme in the responses, but then you went THERE! I was not expecting that ending, Ken. Well done!
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Yeah, I surprised myself with this one.
Thank you, Merril.
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You’re welcome, Ken. Yes, definitely a bit different. 😏
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Tragedy and comedy….I found dark humour in the ending…I hate to admit I would go with it, if I knew the story and of his demise, and turn snd look the other way…
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Thanks, Ain.
I guess some people get what they deserve.
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This is quite intense. Clean cuts indeed! Love it!
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Thank you.
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Oh. my. god. was not expecting that at all. Not to say he didn’t earn his ginsuing, just sayin…. Good use of the prompt line, Ken.
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Thank you, Lisa. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Brutal, but certainly decisive Ken. Strong write!
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Thanks, Rob.
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Dark indeed but compelling story. Nicely done.
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Thank you.
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Yikes!
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Indeed!
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I only hope he deserved it!
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By all indications.
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🙂
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Wow, Ken – a chillingly good read!
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😀 Thank you, Lynne.
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I agree that the calm manner makes it all the more chilling, leaving a hell of a scar.
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Thanks.
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A brutal story about an abusive relationship and revenge. It was dark but I liked it.
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Thank you.
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This was well done, if you’ll forgive my pun.
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Ah yes, a tale that hopefully is a rare occurrence. 😉
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