a cloud passes before the moon
there is no attempt to diminish its light
theirs is a shared moment
the moon a steadfast presence
the cloud a lesson in possibilities
This poem is inspired by Merril Smith’s poem, Chance.
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Lovely, Ken. I’m pleased my poem inspired you.
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Thank you, Merril.
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Beautiful – reading stirs multiple possibilities
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Thank you, Jazz.
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I like this very much!
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Thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome, : )
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Very good, Ken. Clouds in our lives do not diminish the truth!
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🙂 Thank you, Dwight.
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The parts and the whole–they all fit. (K l
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Nice! Especially the last line!
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😀 Thank you.
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Lovely! and inspired by Merril–how wonderful!
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Thank you. 🙂
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I also especially loved the last line.
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Thank you, John. An open mind can see beyond obstacles.
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Love that last line, full of hope🙂. Nice work Ken.
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Thank you, Pat.
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I love this! It could be taken in so many ways, depending upon the reader’s experiences in life. To me, that’s the true art of poetry.
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Thank you. Life is about possibilities.
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