Tear Drops
Tear drops,
when held back,
seep far into the soul,
the well that is deep inside us,
waiting
Waiting
for the moment
when it is essential
that our innermost emotions
be known
Be known,
that expressing
the passion within us
must not be considered shameful,
ever
Ever
should we believe
our emotions, when shared,
do not diminish our stature.
Never
Never
easily shed,
and never taken back,
they are always a part of us.
Tear drops
This is my response to MTB: Crowning Crapsey,
the prompt from Laura Bloomsbury at dVerse ~ Poets Pub.
The Crapsey (or American cinquain) is a form of cinquain first written by Adelaide Crapsey. It’s 5 lines are not rhymed, and have a syllable count of 2-4-6-8-2. A Crown Crapsey, then, is a sequence of five cinquain stanzas functioning to construct one larger poem, with each cinquain being a Crapsey. As it happens, my last stanza came to me first.
I like the message of this poem, especially the fourth stanza.
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Thank you.
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I love what you did with the video!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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Love this piece Ken, and I love to cry — increfible release.
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Thank you, Rob. Agreed.
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I am forever a weeping willow, so I know about tears…I cry for me and everyone else some days.
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Sometimes, that’s what it takes.
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Thank you for sharing, Michael.
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Very beautiful, with a very important message, Ken! Thanks for sharing, and have a beautiful Friday! xx Michael
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And thank you.
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I’m not sure how emotions became associated with weakness, but your words right the wrong. (K)
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Thank you.
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Fine work, Ken, esp Stanza 3. Amen, Brother.
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Thank you. 😀
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Wow! Beautifully penned Ken.
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Thank you, Carol.
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Oh yes indeed. A good cry soothes a wounded soul.
Much💛love
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Thank you.
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this flows like the tears! a very enjoyable read and re-read – most memorable
“and never taken back,
they are always a part of us.
Tear drops”
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Thank you, so much, Laura.
And thank you for the prompt.
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I don’t know either why crying is supposed to be wrong or a sign of weakness. So true, Ken–words and excellent video.
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Thank you, Merril. Making the video was as enjoyable as writing.
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Wonderful! 😊
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Fabulous example Ken.
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Thanks, Paul.
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My pleasure Ken
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Tears have come quite easily these past few years … shed with conviction mine have been. Sadness, frustration, fear … happiness too. A love write, ken.
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Thank you, Helen. Indeed, the past couple of years have been hard. I didn’t lose anyone to the pandemic (btw, my son caught Covid for the second time, even though he’s up to date with his booster vaccine), but knowing about so many who have lost someone close to them has been a reminder of those I’ve lost in the past.
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One benefit of getting older is lessening of my reluctance to cry in front of others. Maybe parents taught us to bottle it up? Maybe it’s part of being introverted? I applaud this poem for its “license” to let tears emerge no matter circumstantial complications. Your 2nd stanza is an aha of sorts – tears do well up from somewhere within! My favorite stanza is the 4th for encouraging “let it flow”.
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Thank you, Jazz. Of course, grief is a process for each of us, but so is joy. Expressing both should be a natural process.
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This is a beautiful ode to tears!
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So many tears are held back… they shouldn’t
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