Within Nature’s Balance
This is my response to Day 28 at napowrimo.net,
where we are asked to write a concrete poem.
Using a screenshot, the lower half of the image shows how it appears on my screen.
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Formatted differently, the poem might appear as below.
Within Nature’s Balance
Imagine the peace and harmony this world
would know, the balance
that could be
achieved
if life were as easy to navigate
as the waters that greet and accept
this paddle with-
out reservation, one of
many essential elements
within the greater
picture
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Thanks, Michael.
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Wonderful. I like how the physical structure supports your message. ❤️Water always brings me back to balance.
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Thank you. Water — yes!
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I love how the concrete version of your poem uses the middle portion of the paddle to connect the peace and harmony on one side with the water on the other side.
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Thank you, Liz. I think the brevity of this helped me visualize it as I wrote.
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You’re welcome, Ken.
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Very original concrete, Ken. Fine work indeed. Thanks.
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And thank you!
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Nice, Ken! A very original approach to this.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Wonderful. The choice of blue and white, the shape and the message all come together in perfect harmony.
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Does not need the shape to get it’s point across. But I really like the blue paddle. (K)
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Had to be blue! Thank you.
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