Heavenly Triangle
Sol’s light on Gaia
casts shadow into darkness,
yet, in a brief conjunction,
leaves Luna as brilliant
when it sets as when it rises.
Gaia’s Demand
Shine your light my way.
Think not of her icy stare,
bestowed in her insolence.
Instead, illuminate
my daily pirouette for you.
Keep it to yourself.
I have no need for your shade,
cast into the darkest night.
This bond I share with Sol
will not suffer from your presence.
Sol’s Dilemma
How is one to choose
between beauties such as these?
Luna, with her nightly glow.
Gaia. So full of life.
May the heavens hold an answer.
I did not stay up for the 3:00am near-total lunar eclipse on 19 November 2021, but I did take this photo at 9:37pm photo of the full moon. (click image for larger view in new tab)
This wayra sequence is shared with OpenLinkNight at dVerse ~ Poets Pub.
The elements of the wayra are:
~ a stanza in 5 lines
~ syllabic, 5-7-7-6-8
~ no rhyme
I love the different voices, and may Sol’s love be enough for both Gaia and Luna.
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Hopefully he has enough to share!
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It must be a really difficult choice for Sol, I agree!
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Poor guy!
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This is incredibly gorgeous writing, Ken! I especially resonate with; “Think not of her icy stare, bestowed in her insolence. Instead, illuminate my daily pirouette for you.” Yes! 💝💝
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Thank you, Sanaa. 😀
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An intricate, powerful ‘dance’ of words in battle. A very clever, original poem with such a beautiful start and play if light and darkness..
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Thank you. It seemed like a natural progression. I’m glad it worked.
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The wayra is such an interesting form. I really enjoyed the interactions, voices and perspectives in this “heavenly triangle”.
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Thank you. 🙂 The first three lines from Lunar Lament have been stuck in my head since we had the wayra prompt last week.
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Reblogged this on OPENED HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you as well for always interesting thoughts, Ken! Have a beautiful weekend! xx Michael
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Do we have to choose, really.
Luv lunar’s words
“This bond I share with Sol
will not suffer from your presence.”
Bravo on the use of the wayra again
Happy Thursday
Much💛love
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😀 Thank you, Gillena.
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wonderful heavenly poem
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Thank you.
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I like the conversations they are having, and nicely done with the wayra sequence. Beautiful photo, too!
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Thank you, Merril. 😀
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Outstanding — love the flow/sequence of this — brilliantly executed
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Thanks, Ron. 🙂
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I like the triangle you created–its a good framing of relationships.
When I got up at 3 it was still cloudy here, but when I got up at 5:30, I was lucky enought to see the last slice disappearing as the moon set below the building outside my kitchen window. An unexpected surprise. (K)
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Thank you. Balance isn’t always as easy as it seems.
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No it’s not.
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