True Direction ~ soliloquy

True Direction

Where is it that I’m headed
paddling these waters?
Is there any direction?
Do I merely wander?

Although no simple answer,
it is a simple choice.
When I’m upon these waters
I hear my inner voice.

The quiet I encounter,
in spite of gay songbirds,
allows my thoughts to wander,
I have, by this time, learned.

Each time I raise my paddle
upon this placid stream,
I find my true direction
is closer than it seems.

This poem is my response to Meeting the Bar: Soliloquy, the prompt from Victoria at dVerse ~ Poets Pub, which is to write a soliloquy, giving a glimpse of inner thoughts and feelings, such as emotions, plans, and desires. I’ve tried to include some examples of poetic device as requested, by using rhyme or near-rhyme and loose meter.

Image: Ellicott Creek, Amherst New York
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15 thoughts on “True Direction ~ soliloquy

  1. I’m not sure at one point it happened, but I found myself mesmerized by your rhyming scheme. Something about loose rhymes and meter that suddenly makes me forget the words I read and instead settle deeply into the song of it all. I suppose it seemed appropriate to lose myself in this peaceful thoughtfulness. Splendid and tranquil, an idyllic poem indeed.

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