The corners of thirst know the absolute want and need I have for you.
This American sentence is my response to Misky’s Twiglet #239 – corners of thirst.
Image source: Wikimedia Commons (author, Mahdi Kalhor)
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Thanks for sharing.
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You are welcome, Ken. Have a nice rest of the week! xx Michael
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Well, you ARE pumping out the Gooooood Stuff, these days, Ken. Allen would love this; I know I do. Thanks.
Your seamless transition from physical to emotional really gives this one its POW!
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Thank you for such high praise, Ron..
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Very nice American sentence.
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Thank you. And thanks for the prompt.
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My pleasure, Ken.
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Wow–this is a wonderful American sentence (and I’m really not a big fan of the form)! Well done, Ken!
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Thank you, Merril. I think I’m getting the hang of it.
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😀
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Could almost be An American Sentence senryu? Dealing with such a big emotional punch.
Well done.
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Thank you, Jules.
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This succinct American sentence sums up my poem exactly. This is just lovely, Ken
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Indeed, it does. Thank you.
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Really good. I have no idea what a corner of thirst is but it works well
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“Where everybody knows your name? 😉
And thanks. 😀
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