more than ash ~ shadorma

July 30, 2021July 30, 2021 / Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr

more than ash

in the end
ash is more than ash
acknowledged
when released
last wish granted with respect
ash much more than ash

This shadorma is inspired by Ron. Lavalette’s Shadorma for Joan,
found here – please read.

4 thoughts on “more than ash ~ shadorma”

Ron.

July 30, 2021 at 12:52 pm

Thanks Ken; I’m greatly honored to have inspired such fine work. Thank you.
(Friendly proof-read: 1) Joan, not Jane; 2) I couldn’t get your link to work.

Nonetheless, Thanks, man; I love your work.

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- Ken / rivrvlogr
  
  July 30, 2021 at 3:50 pm
  
  Both now corrected.
  And thanks, Ron..
  
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memadtwo

July 31, 2021 at 6:43 am

Both poems compliment each other. (K)

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- Ken / rivrvlogr
  
  July 31, 2021 at 11:25 am
  
  Thanks, Kerfe. I couldn’t have written mine without his.
  
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