A Journey with Bashō
faithful servant
gains high regard for renga
chained cherry blossoms
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learning the art of a craft
by following a master
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once mentor is gone
student becomes a teacher
butterfly takes wing
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thoughts turn to honored poet
with the voice of a master
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a reclusive life
beside a banana tree
plagued by loneliness
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follow master’s example
find solace in distant friends
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seeking peace of mind
traveling on narrow road
snow on the mountain
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learn new lessons every day
while discovering friendship
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lightness discovered
in search for satisfaction
until last snowfall
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willing to learn from the past
even as my years grow long
For Poetics: Poems to a Poet, Laura Bloomsbury at dVerse ~ Poets Pub asks us to write a poem about, or addressing, a favorite poet, trying to employ something of the poet’s style. To create this chain of verse regarding Matsuo Bashō, I decided to write a renga (Japanese linked verse poetry, typically collaborative), with haiku referencing his life and responses that reflect my own journey.
Matsuo Bashō was a master of haiku and renga, culminating with the publication of The Narrow Road to the Interior in 1694. As a page or servant, he learned a love for renga and went on to become a teacher, respected for his haiku. Bashō was known for his many travels from Edo (now Tokyo), vacillating from seeking friendship to an escape from the company of others. Near the end of his life, “he relented after adopting the principle of karumi or “lightness”, a semi-Buddhist philosophy of greeting the mundane world rather than separating himself from it.” (per Wikipedia) Also, “rather than sticking to the formulas of kigo [seasonal words], which remain popular in Japan even today, Bashō aspired to reflect his real environment and emotions in his hokku.” (early term for haiku)
Images from Wikimedia Commons
Poet Basho and Moon Festival, by Tsukioka Yoshitoshi
Portrait of Matsuo Basho, by Hokusai
This is fun. I really enjoyed how you used the form to tell the story of a master of the form.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Perhaps my daily blog reads are a sort of “solace in distantfriends” ??
I really like this, Ken.
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Thank you, Jazz.
And yes, I believe they are.
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This is simply beautiful Ken, of the heart, mind, and spirit. Gorgeous image!
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🙂 Thank you, Rob.
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Well crafted! Enjoyed this journey with the Haiku Master, now I’m all zen! 💗🙏💗
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😀 That is most fitting! Thank you.
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So beautiful and well-written!
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Thank you, Lucy.
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And excellent poem Ken. And a great tribute that parallels his life with yours. Well done!
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🙂 Thank you.
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You are welcome!
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You’re good at solo renga and I appreciate you channeling the master in your composition. ::bowing::
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Thank you. 🙏
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You’re welcome, Ken.
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Thank you for honoring the master of Haiku. Wonderful post Ken ☺️
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Thank you, Christine.
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finding solace in distant freinds is what i am doing here. thank you for posting such a lovaly poem.
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And thank you. 🙂
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🥰 Ken 🥰
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Thanks, David! 🙂
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Basho has taught me much, and your piece follows his footsteps. Lovely.
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🙂 Thank you.
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Sheer delight to read this poem – like biting into the fruit straight from the tree! good to be able to read it too alongside the original inspiration
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Thank you, Laura.
And thank you for the prompt. 🙂
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Beautifully done, Ken, I enjoyed walking in Basho’s footsteps! I love the thought of renga as ‘chained cherry blossoms’.
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Thank you, Kim.
I was pleased with that line.
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A fascinating and intricately woven portrait which I believe captures the style of the master!
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Thank you, Ingrid. 🙂
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I like the theme of discovery, especially self-discovery.
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A journey we all take!
Thank you, Paul.
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Pleasure Ken
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I am in haiku heaven, thrilled you chose Bashō. Your poetry is luscious, exquisite … thank you.
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I admire you for the way you have captured the spirit of this form.
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I think he showed us the way how you follow in his footsteps… but there should be a frog somewhere shouldn’t it?
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A most stunning, stunning write, Ken 😀 This is haiku paradise 💝💝
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #6: Ken Gierke’s latest solo #renga for dVerse!
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Thank you for sharing, Frank.
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damn. damn. damn. this is too good. chained cherry blossom. butterfly growing wings. ahh. perfect tribute to the tune of renga.
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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Peaceful, dignified and wise – what a pleasure to read.
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🙂 Thank you.
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Well done. You’ve built a solid and reflective relationship with Basho I think. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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I like how succinct this is.
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Ah yes, the beauty of haiku. 🙂 Thank you.
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Love this poem and your tribute. About 4 years ago we were fortunate to take back-to-back cruises that went to China and Japan. In Japan, we visited a wonderful place with temples, shrines….and in an out-of-the main tourist path, a burial tribute to Matsuo Basho. I was so humbled to stand there by this simple plaque bearing his name and his words….both in English and Japanese. He is revered.
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Thank you, Lillian.
If that was the trip on which you met with a former student, the trip was wonderful, all around.
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Beautiful!
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