True North
I was fading to nothing,
all reason and purpose gone,
when my eyes found hers
and I was instantly drawn.
As the needle in my heart turned,
I knew I had found my true north,
her heart the magnet
that would lead me there.
This is my response to Quadrille #114 – Poetic Magnetism,
the prompt from De Jackson at dVerse Poets Pub,
which is to use a form of the word magnet in a 44-word poem,
with no required meter or rhyme.
Image
(background) Astronomy Picture of the Day
Cygnus: Bubble and Crescent © Wissam Ayoub
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(foreground) Ashmolean Museum, University of Oxford
Qibla compass, from Iran
Loved this!
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Thank you. 🙂
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The best kind of attraction. (K)
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Awww! True magnetism!
(Cool what you did with the photos.)
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Thank you, Merril. 🙂
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Lead me on, yes, a true true-north.
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😀 Thanks, Paul.
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My pleasure Ken
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Romance, the best kind of magnetism!
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Sigh. Yes. 🙂
Thank you.
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Wonderful love poem Ken… 🙂
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Thank you, Rob.
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Another magnetic north, another love poem. You do these beautifully.
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Thank you. 😀
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I like this. Very romantic!
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Merci!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you.
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That’s how true love works… magnetism
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Tried and true.
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The heart as a magnet – yes! We’ve all been there, I think.
Cool photo mashup, too.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Love the idea of the heart as the compass. 🙂
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Thank you, Mish. I followed mine.
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A love quadrille like this one is more than attractive, Ken. These lines are just gorgeous:
‘As the needle in my heart turned,
I knew I had found my true north’.
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Thank you, Kim. I hoped it would work for the thought of a damaged heart being healed.
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