cooler nights
shadows grow longer
oak turning
This haiku is my response to Frank Tassone’s #Haikai
Challenge #157: Autumn Equino
cooler nights
shadows grow longer
oak turning
This haiku is my response to Frank Tassone’s #Haikai
Challenge #157: Autumn Equino
Lovely, Ken.
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Thank you, Merril.
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Makes me miss the cold forests of the north! Beautiful!
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🙂 Thank you, Colleen.
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Both my thumbs are up on this one, Ken. Well done.
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Thanks, Ron. 🙂
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Those pesky oak leaves seem to stay whole the longest and my neighbors end up in my yard!
Lovely verse. It was chilly last night – 39F Not quite enough to quite the mosquitoes.
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The year is turning. The oak leaves know.
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They do.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (9/21/20): Ken Gierke’s latest haiku for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Thanks for sharing, Frank.
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It’s in the air. (K)
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I’m good with it.
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You capture the time lag—we notice the big changes, wake up one morning and the season’s changed, but nature proceeds gradually with tiny brush strokes.
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Thank you. Yes, waiting for us to catch up.
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🙂
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Lovely thought. Can’t get to Florida soon enough!!
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My favorite season. Thank you.
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Nature’s cycle … beautiful ☺️
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Thank you. 🙂
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