fragments of a tune
a body manifested
with each measured note
This senryū is inspired by Pablo Picasso’s
“Girl with a Mandolin” and is in response to
Reena’s Exploration Challenge #146: Cubism,
which asks us to explore cubism.
Image source: Wikipedia – Girl with a Mandolin, by Pablo Picasso
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Such a sensitive interpretation!
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Thank you, Jane.
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Sublime and delightful!
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Merci!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #2: Ken’s latest #senryu for Reena Saxena’s latest challenge!
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Thanks for sharing, Frank.
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My pleasure, Ken! 🙂
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Succinct, geometric thought, tight cube.
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simple formula
parametric equation
a poem is born
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The arch of thought
Takes shape
in the circumference
of a square
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Fragments is the perfect word. (K)
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Ah, but the sum of the whole!
(And, thank you.)
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I think of a symphony of people all with their part of the composition and making a united melody. (I may be projecting my hopes on your poem). Anyway it made a strong picture of harmony in my mind, your poem did.
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Thank you, Claudia. We could use a little harmony.
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