Speaking of the Sea
Seasons have passed me by, and time moves on.
My wandering thoughts turn towards the sea,
sitting in delicate balance upon
the waves, like footprints on a sodden beach.
Fewer waves ahead, yet less time to rest,
so much left unsaid, this my final speech.
Mine is a ballad that’s best left unsung.
But if, by chance, my name crosses your lips,
may it be waves of praise that grace your tongue.
The challenge in Poetics: Three from the Welsh speaking sea, from Laura at dVerse Poets Pub is to write a poem using three of five end-rhyme word sets from Raymond Garlick’s Welsh-Speaking Sea. So, three (or more) rhyming tercets, with no meter required, but with the added challenge of using pentameter. No real meter here, but still 10-syllable lines. The word sets (with the option to reverse each word order):
speech / rest / beach
on / sea / upon
word / breath / bird
way / sound / bay
sung / lips / tongue
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Very well done piece. Thank you!
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And thank you!
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You rocked the prompt, and you’re a part of the majority that used a Sea theme. I liked the internal rhyme /fewer waves ahead–so much left unsaid/.
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Thank you for that, Glenn. 🙂
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There is a wistfulness in your words, but also acceptance. It brings visions of a captain setting sail on a final voyage…
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I like that interpretation. Thank you, Lisa.
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You are welcome, Ken.
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I like the last line with waves of praise.
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🙂 Thanks, Frank.
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I like how you made it literal and allegorical to time frame of your life – good use of the rhyme sets and the enjambment helps it flow. Extra points for pentameter & thank you for joining the prompt
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Thank you, Laura, and thank you for the challenge. 🙂
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and thank you for rising to it
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like footprints on a sodden beach.
Fewer waves ahead, yet less time to rest,
so much left unsaid, this my final speech.
Getting closer all the time!
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Ain’t it though?! Thanks, Dwight.
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I’m jealous. I throw words about intuitively, but form is important. Well done!
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Thank you. 🙂 I like to think I throw them around intuitively, but it usually takes a little (sometime, a lot of) nudging.
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This has a wonderful timelessness. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe. If only it could be timeless.
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Those last 2 lines? You can rest assured my tongue would offer praise!
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😀 I’ll take it! Thank you, Jazz.
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I agree with Glenn. You rocked it.
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Thanks!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena.
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Thank you for sharing this, Reena. 😀
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So soothing and beautiful. We all must often wonder, would our names be taken in love or in hatred after we are long gone.
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Thank you. That’s something to keep in mind throughout life.
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Lots of levels here, I think. Great use of the rhyme words.
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🙂 Thank you, Sarah.
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A poignant poem, Ken, and a reminder of our mortality, especially in the lines:
‘Fewer waves ahead, yet less time to rest,
so much left unsaid, this my final speech.’
The final lines made me tearful. I agree with Jade that your words evoke the image of a captain setting sail on a final voyage.
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Thank you, Kim. That journeu we’re all on.
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Yes, may there be fewer waves ahead…and may it be long before your final speech!
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Yes! Thank you. 🙂
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I do love this, and that wish you close the poem with.
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Thanks, Björn.
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I can see this carved on a rugged gravestone near the beach..And I know just the place!
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Wouldn’t that be nice. Thank you. 🙂
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I love that last line, Ken!
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Thank you, Sara. 🙂
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