rudderless
far from flawless,
my memories, homeless
in their wanderings
searching for details
in times no longer ageless,
leaving me helpless
formless, these thoughts
passing through my mind,
almost wordless
Choosing words from the supplied list (below), this series of senryū is my response to
Tuesday Poetics: Less is More, more or less, from Laura at dVerse ~ Poets Pub.
ageless ~ boundless ~ breathless ~ careless ~ cloudless ~ colourless ~ faceless ~ fearless ~ feckless ~ flawless ~ formless ~ harmless ~ heedless ~ helpless ~ homeless ~ listless ~ needless ~ restless ~ rootless ~ senseless ~ tasteless ~ weightless ~ windowless ~ wordless ~
I’m also linking this to Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday
#Poetry Challenge No. 156, #Poet’sChoice.
“Rudderless” feels sooo appropriate for my brain’s meanderings of late!
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What were we talking about? 😉
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Ah, we all have those fleeting thoughts, wordless, senseless…yet returning through our thought banks to leave us wondering once again.
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And we survive.
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Glimpses, if we could only pull them in and hold them, bring them into focus…(K)
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Like seeing the past as a “trailer.”
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I like the description of memories as homeless wanderers.
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Thanks, Frank. Visitors that appear at random moments.
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Very well done, Ken. It creates a state of mind one can find themselves in from time to time.
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Thank you, Lisa. I’ve always had a terrible memory, especially for detail and often for complete events. Aging doesn’t help matters.
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Mine was better when I worked at the courts, but I was a “sticky queen” which helped as it’s not photographic by any stretch. (sticky as in post-it notes). Memory can be improved with practice. I bought a $10 clone of “luminosity” and used it for about 3 months. My recall was charted and definitely improved over time. I guess it depends on how much you care about having a good memory. If you don’t then no worries 🙂
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Nice Ken, Almost like a dream!
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Thanks, Dwight. Memories can seem that way, especially as the details slip away.
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What a perfect title to your wordless ending.
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Thank you, Björn.
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The word “rudderless” is a very descriptive word, and possibly what a lot of us are feeling.
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Thank you, Sara. Current times can feel that way, for sure.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you for sharing.
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Congratulations Ken on being poet of the week. Had a few moments like that yesterday:)
Nicely done.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat. 🙂
I’ve lost count of those moments!
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