Tiny currents brush the edges of my mind.
Random details, trivial and not-so-
minor, flutter, teasing my thoughts.
Never clear in their intent. Prodding me
to remember, or struggling
to break the tethers imposed
by those details, always out of reach?
This is my response to Reena’s Exploration Challenge #113,
which offers a variety of images for inspiration.
Image source: pexels.com / Anthony
Lovely! Mind, thoughts, memories…, so difficult to deal with them, so sure they are a great subject for poetry.
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Thank you. 🙂
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One of the unanswerable mysteries, unless they flutter within your grasp… Nicely done, Ken!
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Thank you, Lisa. 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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You described the subconscious beautifully.
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Thank you, Reena.
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Fleeting memories ….. by rivrlogr
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Thank you for sharing. 🙂
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I know that feeling well. (K)
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More frequently as time passes, here.
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