Night Wind
The unmistakable voices of the trees
calling out to the hidden moon,
seeking the caress of its light,
the end of their unease.
A midnight susseration.
This gogyohka is inspired by Merril Smith’s gogyohka, Night Wind.
Please read her original here.
Image: full moon, 22 December 2018
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They make a good pair. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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Lovely, Ken. I like the thought of the trees calling out to the moon.
It was my first gogyohka, too. Thanks for the mention!
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🙂 Thank you, Merril.
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I like the play of sound and light in your poem, the susurrations. 💨
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Thank you, Janice. 🙂
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Lovely. OMG! There are so many kinds of poems. I feel so inadequate to comment.
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Thank you. 🙂
There are some forms that just don’t appeal to me, but once in a while I’ll try a new one.
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