The prompt for Poetics: Kafka for Kids, from Amaya at dVerse, is to use one of the provided quotes by Franz Kafka as the basis for a children’s nursery rhyme. In using the line “I do not see the world at all; I invent it,” I am taking a slight departure from the nursery rhyme route to show you something I wrote several years ago.
While my children were in middle school, Craig Frazier was their music instructor. He also was a volunteer docent at the Buffalo Zoo, and he produced a CD of animal-themed music as a fundraiser for the zoo. One of the tracks is titled “A Giraffe Lullaby,” and I wrote lyrics to accompany it.
A Giraffe Lullaby
Come lay your head on my shoulder
and I will tell you
all the things you can look forward to
Now close your eyes
and dream dreams of what you want to be
The ones that you love will be there
to walk beside you
in your dreams as you slumber tonight
All of the leaves in the trees
will hang low for you
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Come lay your head on my shoulder
and I will tell you
all the things you can look forward to
All of the leaves in the trees
will hang low for you
and be as many as stars in the night
The stars in the night
A few years back, I asked my daughter and her friends to sing “A Giraffe Lullaby,”
so that I could record their vocals with the music.
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And now for something in a totally different direction.
At the end of the prompt, Amaya included a Kafka quote with which she could well relate.
Well, so can I, at times. So, I’ve used that quote to create a cross-out poem.
Isolation
No memory,
nor experience.
I have nothing,
know less.
What I do know is beyond
me, my thoughts a wall.
The essence, incoherent.
Thinking, scarcely.
Ken Gierke
Been impressed and related to Kafka since my teen years. Most folk know him from ‘The Trial’ and ‘The Castle” but his short stories are worth reading too. I especially like ‘Metamorphosis’. If you don’t know it there’s a translation here:
http://www.kafka-online.info/the-metamorphosis.html
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Yes, I’ve always been impressed by Metamorphosis. Thank you.
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I thought you might know it. Some of your current readers may discovers it thuswise though. 🙂
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It’s a tale well worth reading, and re-reading. 🙂
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I can but endorse that pronouncement.
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Although of course I couldalso add that it is a fine allegory.
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Yes.
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I like your description of those thoughts: “my thoughts a wall”
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Thanks, Frank.
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What a sweet lullaby, Ken. It lulls with the rhythm for sure. Creative use of the quote that turned out well.
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Thank you, Lisa. After writing this, I wrote a short children’s story to precede it.
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Beautiful
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🙂 Thank you.
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It is such a delightful read.
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Excellent all around. (K)
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Thank you. 🙂
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What a wonderful lullaby (the singing/music are terrific!) and poem. Reading this just before bed … will perhaps dream of giraffes?
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Thank you. (Belated) Sweet Dreams!
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I enjoyed listening to the recording while I read the lullaby, Ken, and it’s given me a lovely fuzzy feeling to start my day!
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Thank you, Kim! 🙂
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Enjoyed the lovely musical rendition of Giraffe Lullaby…thanks for sharing this gem, Ken!
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Thank you, Lynn!
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my pleasure…
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I love both the lyrics and the blackout poem from Kafka… somehow they contrast each other in a way to create sparks in the middle
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Thanks, Björn. While extremes are important, the best is often found in the middle.
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I love it Ken, Such a cute photo also. I could not get the sound to play. Your Kafka poem was very unique. Great job.
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Thank you, Dwight.
It’s the WordPress audio player, so there should be no problem.
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It was my fault I accidently left it on mute!
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😉
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I just love this! The song is so sweet and sung so beautifully. How wonderful that you are sharing all of these incredible relics 😉
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Thank you, Lorrie.
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Creative how you constructed that erasure poem with such a short, albeit rich, quotation! Thank you very much for sharing your poem with your daughter and friends singing. Was that you playing piano? The melody was sweet and perfect for lulling a heavy-lidded child into dreamland. Are you from Buffalo? My mom is from the Amherst/Williamsville area.
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The music is from the CD created to raise donations for the zoo. I laid the vocals over it and gave the mp3 to Craig Frazier, the music teacher who wrote the instrumental.
I grew up in Tonawanda, moved to North Tonawanda when I married in ’75, and moved to Missouri in 2012 to be with someone special. We were married in 2017, at the lighthouse in Erie, PA, which worked well for my children living in the Cleveland and Buffalo areas.
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And thank you!
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A beautiful lullaby, especially these lines, which remind me of an Irish blessing somehow:
All of the leaves in the trees
will hang low for you
and be as many as stars in the night
-Really enjoyed hearing the music as well!
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Thank you. 🙂
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The song is so beautiful, and to hear it sung by your daughter really touches my heart. This does fit my prompt so well, and I’m glad you drew my attention to it 🙂
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Thank you, Ingrid. 🙂 She was too old (eight or nine) for a lullaby when I wrote it, but we still sang it together for a few nights. She was 16 when I asked them to sing for me so I could layer it over the music.
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That’s a lovely story! My 8 year old gets to hear the little one’s lullabies 😊
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Lovely! Loved the recording in your daughter’s voice.
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Thank you. 🙂
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My pleasure.
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