Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #102 Renga with Bashō … ancient times
asks us to create a renga (or chain of verses) by following
each provided haiku by Matsuo Bashō (in blue), in any order, with two lines.
A “closed chain” is attained when the hokku (starting verse)
and ageku (closing verse) connect in a way to make “the circle” complete.
still summer
the harvest moon too hot
to enjoy the coolness
no relief as sun rises
its warm light on garden path
chrysanthemum flowers
bloom at the stonemason’s
between stones
burst of color against gray
dimmed by clouds crossing the sky
morning glories
in the daytime a lock lowered
on the gate
will not keep out heavy rain
as it pools in the garden
flood waters
stars too will go to sleep
on top of a rock
wait for a stonemason’s dreams
to build them up before us
plum blossom scent
since ancient times the word
has been sorrowful
raising a glass to comrades
missing those lost in battle
warriors
the bitterness of pickles
in the talk
drinking wine in the garden
sour wine fitting for the mood
Images source: Harvard Art Museums
Pot Marigold and Rashumon Flowers, by Kubo Shunman
I love this, somehow suits my mood, so I guess that’s the immediate connect, I particularly ponder the stars sleeping on top of rocks.
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Or stars as dreams. Thank you. 🙂
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Indeed 🙂
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You really capture the feeling of heaviness. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe. I’m used to rain bringing a relief in temperatures, but here, in Missouri, that only means a drop into the 80’s for the September rains. It makes me long for autumn, even more.
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It’s interesting how localized weather patterns are.
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