take wing, our secrets
living on with you, revealed
when the time is right
seeds to inform the future
of all that may be again
This tanka is inspired by a comment left by Kerfe on my nonet, Lone Vigil, and is
my second response to Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday
#Poetry Challenge No. 145 #PhotoPrompt, with the provided photo
from Pixabay/Susan Cipriano.
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I am so impressed! Well done, Ken!! Your creativity is unsurpassed!
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🙂 Thank you, Colleen!
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What a wonderful distillation! (K)
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🙂 Thank you, Kerfe. 🙂
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I love the style of this poem, Ken.
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🙂 Thank you.
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Hi, Ken! I love your Tanka. It’s like the sequel to my double Cinquain. 🙂
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Ooh, yes! Thank you.
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