to listen,
fine not to listen, fine too…
nightingale
Chiyo-Ni
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to listen,
accept the sounds around you
try to understand
fine not to listen, fine too…
being a part of that world
accepting each voice
nightingale
singing for all who listen
knowing when to sing
I try to finish a troiku in one sitting, but it can be time consuming. I set this one aside, so it was not finished before the prompt window closed. The original haiku (in blue) by Chiyo-Ni was provided last week in Carpe Diem #1686 Troiku Month – Nightingale.
A troiku is three haiku, with each of the three lines from a suggested haiku as the first line of each haiku in the troiku. It’s not always possible to have a 5-7-5 format in the second haiku, due to the limitations of the suggested haiku. The name of the form is derived from “troika,” a sled or carriage drawn by three horses harnessed side-by-side, an iconic symbol of Imperial Russia.
Images
The Metropolitan Museum of Art
Roses and Bamboo with Nightingale, by Teisai Hokuba
Wikimedia Commons (troika)
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #8: Ken’s latest #troiku (almost) for Carpe Diem!
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Thanks for sharing, Frank.
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My pleasure 😇
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So enjoyed this.
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Thank you, Paul.
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