A Wall I Cannot Scale
Where once it was possible
to breach the wall that has grown
between us, it has become ever darker
within, so that not even the light of day
can reach you. Here, there is life.
I hear robins and sparrows. What birds
call to you, and would they want to
be in such darkness? Would I want to
open a door that is now forever closed?
This is my response to Thursday Photo Prompt: Forgotten #writephoto
at Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo, with her photo (edited here).
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There is a whole world in this pôst, and an important question…
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Thank you.
I imagine this as a situation where all questions have been exhausted, with answers still unknown.
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thank you for sharing. 🙂
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Very good take on the photo and an often asked question unhappily.
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Thanks, Jen. This has the feel of something that’s just not meant to be.
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Yes, it does.
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The human cry. (K)
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Thanks, Kerfe.
Communication and understanding are never guaranteed.
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Now there’s a question !
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And probably often repeated.
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I like the questions–without answers–here.
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Thank you. 🙂
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🙂
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Quietly heartrending really…
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Thank you, Sue. Yes, it would seem to be one of those things not meant to be.
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So it would seem…
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Merci!
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Thank you for sharing, Sue.
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I really felt this poem. The pain and the frustration of a relationship where everything has been exhausted. 😢
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