Pisces
With the whisper of waves brushing the skin
of my kayak beneath and beside me,
the dance of a shower on my skin
in the sensuous tease of a long caress,
or immersion at great depth with sunlight
filtered until I am as one with my nature,
both within or without, I am
with water, and I am complete.
The prompt for Poetics: In My Element, from Amaya at dVerse, is to write a poem that explores what a cosmology says about the writer. Of course, mine would involve water?
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Sternzeichen Fische (Johannes Regiomontaus – 1512)
Hmmm. This one seems… I don’t know, maybe luxurious, langourous, leisurely… restful, reflective, drifting, floating on the tide etc etc etc
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it also is very very sexy
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wet
carress
y e s
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Thanks, Daniel. Water is all of that for me.
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Beautiful poem Ken, wonderful expression of your nature as related to your sign.
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Thanks, Rob. 🙂
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Lovely poetry Ken, touching and graceful.
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Thank you, Hélène. 🙂
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This is gorgeous, Ken.
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🙂 Thank you, Em.
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Nicely done Ken, I could feel the cold water splashing on my skin and then emersing into the water on a hot summer day! Great images!
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I’m glad you could join me, Dwight! Thank you!
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We will have to do it more often!! :>)
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I can hear the whispers of the waves on the skin and there’s a lifelong partnership in that that just may have been preordained. There is a lasting sense that you are meant to be ‘of water.’
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Thank you. This definitely brings a smile. 😀
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A great poem, Ken. I am also a Pisces.
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Thanks, Robbie!
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Ahhh, what a poem to read right before I head for bed … just might stir up some dreams! This is so sensual in a spiritual sort of way … especially the rain’s teasing caress … brings to mind days I lived in South Florida where rain happens spontaneously anytime it wants to. I stopped running to get out of it … car seats were leather, so no big deal if I slid in soaked. (Humidity so thick in South Florida that rain actually felt better than sweating!)
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Thanks, Jazz!
I don’t do well in humidity, so let’s pretend it’s not water. 😉
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I love the sense of floating and gliding through water in this poem, Ken, especially in the lines:
‘…the whisper of waves brushing the skin’
and
‘the dance of a shower on my skin’.
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Thank you, Kim. I was pleased with those two lines.
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Fantastic description. Love this.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Lovely poem, Ken. I am not such a water creature, but this certainly makes me want to be. It is very sensual.
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Thank you, Merril. Come on in, the water’s fine! 🙂
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I’ll just sit back and let you paddle. 🙂
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🙂
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Very sensual and I love how you closely identified with the water element.
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🙂 Thank you.
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Fabulous! I love that last line- I am with water and I am complete. I’ve not known many Pisces in my life Ken- rare souls.
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Thank you, Linda!
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Of course water. And evocative as always. (K)
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😀 Thank you, Kerfe.
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This is one of my favourites from you.
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Thank you!
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I could feel that water flowing all around me. Comfy poem Ken.
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Thank you, Sara.
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I love that you found your element like that… myself am Aquarius… so water is fine with me as well
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Thank you, Björn.
I’m not really into astrology, but the water element certainly applies.
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Wonderful
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Thanks.
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Pleasure
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Your love of water comes through loud and clear! Nice write.
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Thank you.
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Every time I read you’re work I am more and more grateful that you are sharing your wonderful talent with us. Your imagery keeps drawing me in and won’t let me go. Beautiful emotions you carry and share with us. Thank you Ken, for being the wonderful poet you are.
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Thank you so much, Walt!
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My pleasure!
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The water feels soothing and protective here. I’m the sign of the crab so water is all of that for me as well. Lovely poem.
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Thank you, Jade. 🙂
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You are welcome.
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Nice, Ken! Esp liked,
“the dance of a shower on my skin“ 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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I really love this one, Ken.
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Thank you, Betty. 🙂
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