Rising Falls
Beside the vast and rushing waters,
Within the cascade’s swirling mist
I marvel at a wondrous scene
Rising moon in amber splendor
A welcome sight this summer’s eve
Beside the vast and rushing waters
Contemplating nature’s wonders
Thoughts consumed by roaring thunder
Within the cascade’s swirling mist
Embracing this gift of nature
This beauty before my eyes
I marvel at a wondrous scene
Since I missed Poetics: Cascade at dVerse from Amaya (Gospel Isosceles), I’m linking this to Open Link Night #240. The original prompt asks that we write a poem using the word “cascade,” with an optional prompt of using the cascade form of poetry. Coincidentally, I was introduced to this form by Jane Dougherty three years ago, when she suggested using the form with the word “cascade.” I wrote two responses at that time, here and here.
The Photographer’s Ephemeris shows the direction of sunrise, sunset, moon rise, and moon set for any point on a map. For this photo, I crossed the border and took the shot from the Canadian side of the gorge at Niagara Falls.
Cascade ~ four (or more) three-line stanzas, with no set meter or rhyme
~ three lines of the first verse used successively as last lines of following verses
~ line pattern A/B/C, d/e/A, f/g/B, h/i/C, (j/k/D, etc.)
~ longer poems may be created by having a longer first verse
An interesting poetic form. LOL, I don’t do rhymes but admire those that do
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Rhyme is never my first choice. While I don’t mind reading it, it seldom feels natural when writing it.
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Exactly. To me it feels contrived
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Pure Cascade form, rocking the prompt; nice movement and feel of the waterfall through the stanzas.
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Thanks!
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Your poem makes a great word picture! Cascading water is a wonderful thing to watch.
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Thank you, Dwight. Yes, enthralling.
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Oh this is absolutely stunning! 😀
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Merci!
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I’m a freak for waterfalls, so you had me! I love the addictive ozone the big one put off. Liked this Ken
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Thanks, Rob.
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A lovely cascade poem or an actual cascade–and wonderful photo, Ken.
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Thank you, Merril.
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*of, not or 🙂
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I don’t know which I like better, the photo or the poem. Of course you would do something lovely with water! (K)
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Thank you!
😀
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I have not tried the cascade form yet but this feels like a wonderful example. The Canadian side is definitely the best view!! 😉
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Thank you.
It does, but it can be so crowded!
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