Carpe Diem #1607 Tan Renga – an open window is a challenge
with a twist – create a tanka starting with the provided haiku by Chèvrefeuille,
(in blue) followed by a 3rd and 4th stanza (another haiku and response),
essentially making this a tan renga / solo renga.
the sound of the surf
enters my home through the open window
and a butterfly
© Chèvrefeuille
wings of light wakening all
bringing joy and contentment
butterfly dancing
with wave shimmer reflections
fanciful vision
whispering waves symphony
providing nature’s soundtrack
Image source: alphacoders.com (edited here)
rivrvlogr 
Nature’s soundtrack…the best. (K)
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😀
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Ken, this is such a beautiful and spiritual poem.
Every line, every stanza shimmers with light.
miriam
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Thank you, Miriam!
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Butterflies and surf – a wonderful combination.
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Thank you, Jules.
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Fabulous scenes! (@—>—)
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Merci!
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