The prompt for Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation # 71
Crossroads Hineri … cherry blossoms
starts with two haiku by Chèvrefeuille (in blue) to be used to create a “fusion” haiku,
which is then to be the base to create a troiku.
standing naked
in awe of the first cherry blossom
dancing in the garden
on winter’s edge
the first Cherry blossom blooms
rain falls softly
© Chèvrefeuille
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early rain waking
reluctant cherry blossoms
forgetting winter
early rain waking
new buds waiting to open
in spite of the cold
reluctant cherry blossoms
wishing for warmer weather
welcome chance to drink
forgetting winter
surrounded by fresh blossoms
gay robin singing
A troiku is three haiku, with each of the three lines from a suggested haiku as the first line of each haiku in the troiku. It’s not always possible to have a 5-7-5 format in the second haiku, due to the limitations of the suggested haiku. The name of the form is derived from “troika,” a sled or carriage drawn by three horses harnessed side-by-side, an iconic symbol of Imperial Russia.
Image sources:
wallcoo.net – Robin and Cherry Blossoms, by Susan Bourdet
wikimedia.org (troika)
Very nicely done, Ken!
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Thank you, Kim!
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Fantabulous scenes, Ken! (@—>—) (@—>—)
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Thank you, Dorna!
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A wonderful Troiku Ken!
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