Carpe Diem #1602 Tan Renga – the night of firefly asks us to use a haiku
by Katsuro Nabuko (in blue) to create a Tan Renga Hineri, or tan renga with a twist,
by creating a tanka and following it with a completely new tanka.
Kristjaan describes the original poem as a love-haiku.
I wear loosely
and meet the man
at the night of firefly
© Katsura Nobuko
gentle breeze on warm evening
brushing cheek like soft caress
amid glowing stars
as we look up to the stars
in a warm embrace
we go indoors, turn lights out
leave fireflies for other things
Image source: japantravel.com
That ending is wonderful, Ken!
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Thank you, Merril. Oh, the imagination!
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Romantic … and nostalgic, making one wish for warm evening breeze (on this cold drizzly day).
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Thank you, Jazz. Waiting here, as well.
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