Carpe Diem #1599 Tan Renga – garden at sunrise asks us to complete a given haiku to create a tanka. The haiku provided by Kristjaan for this challenge is one written by me
(in blue) for a previous challenge. (making this a solo renga)
garden at sunrise
shadows erased by first rays
sunflowers turning
Ken Gierke
cock crowing from fence post
eager to welcome new day
Images
© Thelma Winter (Sunflower Sunrise)
Museum of Fine Arts Boston – Rooster, by Nakagawa Shûrei
I really like this juxtaposition. (K)
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Thanks, Kerfe. I wanted something that is a sort of tangent, almost as if the sunflowers (and rooster) are incidental to the overall scene.
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I like this added lines Ken. Makes it a nice tanka.
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Thanks!
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This is lovely. The pics are real eye openers with their vivid colors. I love ths.
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Thank you. 🙂
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😊welcome.
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I love the contrast of sight and sound, Ken!
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Thanks, Kim. 🙂
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Awe…How Fabulous! (@—>—)
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Thank you. 🙂
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Thank you for sharing my poetry in your discussion, Colleen.
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