morning on the beach ~ fusion senryū

morning on the beach
songs from last night in my head
remembering friends

This senryū is my response to Carpe Diem #1565 Pacific Beach … San Diego,
which invites us to write a fusion of two haiku by Chèvrefeuille.

a whisper of rain
awakens me gently
morning on the beach

hot summer night
together with my friends
singing on the beach

© Chèvrefeuille

Image source: californiabeaches.com – (Ellen Browning Scripps Memorial Pier)

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