wind in meadow grass ~ senryū

December 7, 2018January 7, 2019 / Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr

wind in meadow grass
swaying like a lover’s hips
welcome overture

This senryū is my response to Carpe Diem #1561 Yellowstone … meadow,
which invites us to to write Japanese poetry inspired by the provided photo (love themed).

Image source: Wikimedia Commons

10 thoughts on “wind in meadow grass ~ senryū”

Jazz Jaeschke

December 7, 2018 at 1:37 pm

Uh-HUH … nice metaphor

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- rivrvlogr
  
  December 7, 2018 at 1:44 pm
  
  🙂
  
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jessamayann

December 8, 2018 at 9:48 am

Nice one!

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- rivrvlogr
  
  December 8, 2018 at 9:54 am
  
  😀 Thanks!
  
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merrildsmith

December 9, 2018 at 6:15 am

You paint a lovely image with your words.

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- rivrvlogr
  
  December 9, 2018 at 10:44 am
  
  😀
  
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Betty Hayes Albright

December 9, 2018 at 7:47 pm

Love the image! 🙂

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- rivrvlogr
  
  December 10, 2018 at 7:43 pm
  
  So peaceful.
  
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Jules

December 10, 2018 at 10:21 am

While not quite a huge meadow… just yesterday I saw a deer loping in similar grasses in the utility easement across the creek…
🙂

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- rivrvlogr
  
  December 11, 2018 at 7:59 am
  
  What a cool sight.
  
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