The prompt for Carpe Diem Weekend Mediation #54 Crossroads Crystal Brook (troiku) starts with two haiku by Yozakura to be used to create a “fusion” haiku, which is then to be the base for a troiku.
crystal brook
reflects the willow trees
birds sing their song
sweet perfume
memories of a loved one
Jasmine bloom
© Yozakura
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crystal clear water
memories of a loved one
water lily glows
crystal clear water
flowing and unstoppable
from past to future
memories of a loved one
reflection bringing comfort
waking to sunlight
water lily glows
clouds of no significance
to captured sunlight
A troiku is three haiku, with each of the three lines from a suggested haiku as the first line of each haiku in the troiku. It’s not always possible to have a 5-7-5 format in the second haiku, due to the limitations of the suggested haiku. The name of the form is derived from “troika,” a sled or carriage drawn by three horses harnessed side-by-side, an iconic symbol of Imperial Russia.
Image source: Wikimedia Commons (troika)
Beautiful!
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Waking to sunlight…what a wonderful thought. (K)
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Thanks.
Eyes open!
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I especially like your fusion haiku and the water lily image, Ken!
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Thanks, Lynn!
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Stunning, Ken!
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Thanks, Kim!
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An interesting way of displaying your haiku.
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When it’s a process that’s not familiar to the reader, such as a fusion haiku or a troiku, a diagram can make it easier to follow.
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Excellent
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Thanks!
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