water remains motionless ~ tan renga

grass on river bank.jpggrass on river bank
bending over in warm breeze
pale moon looking down

water remains motionless
reflecting the calm I feel

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge September 2018 Chained Together III (18) grass on riverbank provides an opening verse (hokku). We are asked to write a closing verse (ageku). Kristjaan honors me by offering one of my haiku as the hokku. My ageku appears in blue.

Image source: Wikimedia Commons
(Wind Blown Grass Across the Moon, by Utagawa Hiroshige)

Also linked to Promote Yourself Monday at Go Dog Go Café


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