One apple alone
in the abandoned orchard
reddens for winter
© Patrick Blanche
waves pass beneath the branches
gentle wind stirs waist-high grass
Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge September 2018
Chained Together III (6) An Apple, Alone
(Add to the provided hokku by Patrick Blanche – tr. Michael R. Burch –
to create a tanka)
Here’s the original haiku in French:
Une pomme, seul
dans le verger abandonné
rougissent pour l’hiver
Image source: Wikimedia Commons
Paul Ranson’s Pommier aux fruits rouges (Apple Tree with Red Fruit)
Beautiful – love the waves of tall grass …
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Thank you,Jazz. Sometimes stillness just doesn’t work.
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Autumn caught in your two lines like a beautiful gift.
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😀 Thanks!
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