grasses wilt:
the braking locomotive
grinds to a halt.
© Patrick Blanche
hot coals lay beside the track
eager children gather scraps
Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge September 2018
Chained Together III (7) grasses wilt
(Add to the provided hokku by Yamaguchi Seishi – tr. Michael R. Burch –
to create a tanka)
Image source: pxhere.com
(CC0 Public Domain)
It is a wonderful Ad to, Ken.
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Marvelous! (@–>–)
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🙂 Thanks!
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