coating leaves with filthy soot ~ tan renga

/ Ken / rivrvlogr

coating leaves with filthy sootsmoke whirls
after the passage of a train
young foliage
               © Shiki

 coating leaves with filthy soot
heavy cost to transport goods

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge September 2018 Chained Together III (7) grasses wilt offers a second haiku for renga, this one Masaoka Shiki.
(Add to the provided hokku by Shiki to create a tanka.)

Image source: pixabay.com

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