winter storm rages


winter storm rageswinter storm rages
crow takes flight from howling wind
leaving leafless trees
~~~
a lone crow circles
a tempest tipping its wings
leafless branches sway

I have created two different “fusion” haiku for the challenge at
Carpe Diem’s Crossroads #6 A Leafless Tree,
inspired by the words in the following two haiku by Soseki Natsume.

the crow has flown away:
swaying in the evening sun,
a leafless tree.

over the wintry
forest, winds howl in rage
with no leaves to blow.

                      © Soseki Natsume

National/Global Poetry Writing Month ~ Day 17

NaPoWriMo 2018

 

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