frozen pond – dusk of falling leaves

dusk of falling leaves

Carpe Diem Weekend-Meditation #22 Revise That Haiku offers two classic haiku by Basho:

old pond
a frog jumps in
sound of water
~~~~~
autumn evening
a crow perched
on a withered bough

My revisions:

frozen pond
waiting for spring
silence
~~~~~
dusk of falling leaves
crow resting
on barren branch

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