ice melting from eave

ice melting from eave

ice melting from eave
dreams fade like lost memories
gone with morning sun

Senryū response to Carpe Diem #14 Weekend-meditation Revise That Haiku

Original:

falling to the ground
a flower closer to the root
bidding farewell
                    Matsuo Basho

tears flow
falling to the ground
autumn leaves
                    Chèvrefeuille

Image source: pixabay

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