after the fall #writephoto

after the fall

after the fall

at terminal velocity
the precipice was immaterial

what mattered was the outcome

and you were there

out of chaos

This poem is in response to Thursday Photo Prompt – Flow #writephoto, from Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo, with her photo.

11 thoughts on “after the fall #writephoto

  1. I really like this, too. I like how there is speed–free fall–and then everything, words, actions, come together to that word and place, calm. And in my head, I think I read the beginning quickly and then the words slowed down, too.
    And of course, I’m happy for your happy ending. 😉

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