Whether it is a near-to-heart friend
or far-distant relative,
the heart of a tree suffers
with the death of a single branch.
When it is at the very heart,
all who know feel the loss.
This poem is in memory of Ken Thayer, a cousin who lost his battle with cancer this past week.
This my first attempt at Sijo, in response to Carpe Diem Universal Jane #13 Sijo the Korean poem.
Sijo (a Korean verse form related to haiku and tanka)
~ three lines of 14-16 syllables each
~ a total of 44-46 syllables
~ a pause near the middle of each line
~ first half of the line contains six to nine syllables
~ the second half should contain no fewer than five
Originally intended as songs, sijo can treat romantic, metaphysical, or spiritual themes. Whatever the subject, the first line introduces an idea or story, the second supplies a “turn,” and the third provides closure.
Modern Sijo are sometimes printed in six lines.
Sketch artist: Natalie Bucki
Beautiful and poignant, Ken.
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Thank you, Sue.
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Nice Sijo Ken not bad at all for a first attempt. My condolences with your loss.
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Thank you, Kristjaan.
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This is beautiful and I am sorry for your loss. You’ve written a lovely tribute.
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Thank you, Claudia.
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Thanks so much Kenny for writing this beautiful piece for my Ken. He would’ve loved it.
Love you!
Millie
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❤ Much love.
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A lovely tribute, sorry for your loss Ken.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat.
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So sorry for your loss Ken xxx
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Thank you.
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sincere condolences, ken
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Thank you, Paul.
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I’m sorry for your loss, Ken. I think you lost a dear friend not all that long ago, too.
I haven’t heard of this poetry form, but this is a lovely–and heartfelt– tribute.
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Thank you, Merril. Including elders, it’s been a tough year. You can sort of prepare for the elders, but with contemporaries (and younger) it’s can be a real shock. Of course, I’ve reached an age when I can expect more of those shockers.
The poetry form is interesting. It might not have been as easy if I hadn’t had this on my mind, but I’d be willing to try it again.
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Yes, it is especially difficult to lose younger people. I have friends who have lost children. That must be the worse. But I know it is difficult to lose anyone, even if you expect it.
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Love the symbolism and the symmetry of your verse. Grace, Mercy, Peace!
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Thank you, Peter.
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A beautiful poem and lovely tribute to your cousin. I’m so sorry to hear about your loss.
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Thank you.
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Always hard to lose someone you love. A beautiful tribute.
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Thank you, Janice
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“the heart of a tree suffers with
the death of a single branch”
It is a warm feeling to know we are all branches of the same tree. And we are each diminished.
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So true.
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A beautiful tribute–the heart of the poem, the heart of the tree–my condolences to you and your family.
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Tank you, Janice.
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What a beautiful tribute. Sorry for your loss
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Thank you.
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This grieved me, a beautiful remembering
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Thank you. I didn’t know how to express this, until I found this form.
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Just very beautiful – I wish I could say something more verbose but truly that is what it felt
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