Winding River #2 (visiting Tu Fu)
Every day I return from court with spring clothing to pawn
And every day I return from the river area drunk as can be
Many are the places that hold my wine debt
It’s a rare thing to live to seventy
I see painted lady butterflies go deep within the flowers
And I see water drops fall from dragonflies in their leisurely flight
They say that time is fleeting
Brief is our time together, though brief it should not be
Literal translations of classic Chinese poetry can be found at chinese-poems.com. This is my interpretation of a poem by Tu Fu. The literal translation, as provided at chinese-poems.com, is as follows:
Winding River (2)
Court return every day pawn spring clothes
Every day river area utmost drunk return
Wine debt common go place have
Life seventy always rare
Through flowers vanessa butterfly deep deep see
Drop water dragonfly leisurely fly
Pass on speech time all be on move
Brief time mutual recognise not mutual separate
Image source: Wikimedia Commons
I keep meaning to try these, yours and Bob’s are so intriguing. Thanks, Ken.
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Thank you, Michael.
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It is quite coincidental but today (and I am 73) I was mowing the lawn and I stopped and sat and looked at an orange dragonfly. They are quite easy to see. My daugter is 20 and she told me she hasn’t seen one except the one I point out to her.
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It sounds like you had a refreshing break.
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I like your adaptation, Ken. The linked images are beautiful.
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Thank you, Jane.
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You might enjoy the book “Sunflower Splendor: Three Thousand Years Of Chinese Poetry”, co-edited by Wu-chi Liu & Irving Yucheng Lo, if you can get hold of a copy.
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Found it. Thanks!
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Savour and enjoy. 🙂
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thank you for sharing.
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I have always loved old Chinese poetry. Thank you for giving this to us 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by, Daniel.
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Your interpretation is really good !
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Thank you.
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Beautiful interpretation, Ken. I love the images you create, and the sense that this is an old man reflecting on his life.
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Thank you. That’s something I’ve come to appreciate more, as time goes by.
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Nice. (K)
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