Dreamlight – #writephoto



Dark and long, this passage seems
When they visit in my dreams
Those I’ve loved, now lost to me
Troubles gone, their souls set free

Bathed in light as they appear
Dark succumbs when they draw near
Peace resides within their light
Solace reigns in their long night

When I wake, dark far behind
Knowing fates are intertwined
Those once lost not far apart
That refound light fills my heart

This is my response to Sue Vincent’s  Thursday Photo prompt – Liminal – #writephoto, with her photo.  I nearly gave up on this and reverted to free form, until Bonnie helped me recover the meter in the first verse.


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